We decided that we didn't like the flow of the opening, and it appeared more like a trailer than an opening. So we edited the ending of the 2 minutes to achieve so.
This is our new idea...
Re-draft Story Board, final scenes, 30 - 34
Re-draft of Call Sheet
The new opening now ends with Rachael grown up which means we need to re-audition for the role of an older Rachael and a male, who will be her boyfriend.