Audience Feedback

We have begun to receive some audience feedback to our intial idea of our opening 2 minute film.

When describing to a fellow student what our opening included the student, Ben Glover pointed out a key piece of critism.

"Who is the killer? Because from what you just told me I'm unsure as to who has killed the babysitter, was it the child or someone else who we don't see in the opening two minutes?"

This led us to realise that the audience might mis-interpret who the killer is, and might believe that it is the child who kills the babysitter. This is not the case. If we were to complete the film it would follow a story line somewhat similar to Prom Night, where Rachael is stalked by some mystery person who killed the babysitter when she was younger and is still following her, and continues to kill the people around her to get to her. Another similar idea to All the Boys Love Mandy Lane, in which Mandy is stalked by someone who kills her friends to get to her.